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Harry's Class of 2014 Learning The Hard Way 15:31 - Oct 1 with 392 views

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I have started writing for www.footballscores.com as a columnist for QPR. all comments and feedback would be greatly appreciated... no matter how cut throat ;)

Harry's Class of 2014 Learning The Hard Way on 15:39 - Oct 1 with 375 views

simmo

First paragraph

'However a lapse in defensive duties from new boy Sandro allowed Bertrand a free run, who duly accepted the invitation to fire the Saints ahead.'

Sandro went off injured after about 8 minutes, it was Phillips who didn't track his run properly. You'' probably want to get the facts straight if you want people to read past the first 6 lines...

ask Beavis I get nothing Butthead

Harry's Class of 2014 Learning The Hard Way on 16:01 - Oct 1 with 358 views

PaulFurlongsProtege

Harry's Class of 2014 Learning The Hard Way on 15:39 - Oct 1 by simmo
First paragraph 'However a lapse in defensive duties from new boy Sandro allowed Bertrand a free run, who duly accepted the invitation to fire the Saints ahead.' Sandro went off injured after about 8 minutes, it was Phillips who didn't track his run properly. You'' probably want to get the facts straight if you want people to read past the first 6 lines...

I did pick up on that mistake but by the time I had the article had already been posted. However I do appreciate your honesty and will put the mistake down as a learning curve

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